Kim's poem, as workshopped, first draft followed by second draft (discussed in a later workshop):

Photograph – British Library Reading Room
– November 23d 1997

There are too many writers to stand
so we sit in the chairs – yes that's me
leaning towards Helen

No Max, of course.
But that's me
three down from Penelope

Kathy Lette, triumphant, being told
to take her feet off the chairs
– no one mentions her bum

and that's me!

tomorrow and tomorrow and tomorrow
bring the ordinary horrors: smuggled
sweets, dirty fmgers, leaky pens
illicit gum

but today, baby Alexander
Pitt-Kethley's amiable drool
shines as radiantly as
Kathy Lette's black heels
Peter Porter's spilled wine

And in a hundred years time
When the negative's turned,
I'll still be there: in front of Harold
leaning towards Helen
three to the left of Penelope,
two up from Tony Benn

Right beside Enoch Soames
(unidentified)


second draft (discussed in a later workshop):

Official Photograph ( Now Lost)
British Library Opening
23.11.1997

There are too many writers to stand
so we sit on the chairs

yes, that's me!

three down from Penelope
leaning towards Helen
just two to the right of Tony Benn

                            the old Reading Room only a memory
                            its great airy dome made redundant
                            by this post-modern halogen-light sky

No one's thinking of Marx, of course,
just Harold in mid-pause at the back
                            being historical

and that's me!

Watching Kathy, triumphant
press the shine of her desk
with her sleek Antipodal bum

                            to the left, the new readers rows
                            of pre-millenium computers
                             already obsolete

but that's me!

And in a hundred years time
when the negative's turned
I'll still be there:

In front of Harold
Leaning towards Helen
Three to the right of Penelope

Two up from of Tony Benn
Right beside Enoch Soames
                          - unidentified

[rewrite: Two to the right of Tony Benn]

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