Money Puzzle Tree Part V
© Chris Benham, 2001

Harry parked neatly alongside an old blue Micra and got out of his car, pausing for a moment to have another long look at the elegant building before him. It almost seemed alive today as the rain cascaded down over the long steep roof, gurgling as it coursed through the ancient guttering and down onto the shingle pathway. Even the mermaids in the fountain seemed to have broad smiles on their faces. 

He shivered as a drop of rain found its way down his back and he moved slowly across the forecourt towards the steps leading up to the nursing home. He was just about to let himself in when he remembered something and trotted back to his car with a little smile on his face. 

Carefully, Harry hid the Jamaican Ginger cake in his deepest pocket before returning to the magnificent house. 

It was not Julie sat behind the receptionist’s desk today, but the young woman seemed to be expecting him. 

“Good afternoon. Is it Mr Bartram?” She smiled approvingly as she checked her watch, “Betty will be impressed, you are right on time. Please go straight up, they are expecting you.” 

“Thank you” 

He climbed the stairs slowly, again marvelling at the sheer sophistication of the old house. He could imagine some attractive young woman making a grand entrance as she gracefully descended the stairway, blushing and smiling coquettishly at a fortunate young admirer stood below. How sad that Sally and John had never played out that scene; it would have made a memorable moment, he thought to himself. 

Harry paused at Betty’s door, and subconsciously, he started straightening his clothes, rubbing the toecaps of his shoes against the back of his trousers. Finally, satisfied with his appearance, he knocked, and waited for Betty’s instruction to enter. 

The door opened and all of Harry’s composure left him in an instant. 

Stood in the doorway, was the most beautiful woman he had ever seen. Her ebony hair, slightly wet from the rain, draped over her forehead in the most charming of ways, partly concealing her large, dark eyes. She was the woman that he had seen in the old blue car yesterday, while he was waiting to pull away from Boldregreen. 

“Hello Mr Bartram, I’m Joanna, Betty’s granddaughter. Won’t you please come in…” 

The look of triumph on Betty’s face was inescapable. Her shameless attempt at matchmaking had worked wonderfully. The instant attraction between the two young people was obvious. Harry stood there, nervously wringing his hands together, as Joanna moved away from the door with a huge grin on her flushed face. The look of approval she threw towards her grandmother was one of those secret female looks that seem to say ‘Oh my! He’s gorgeous!’ 

“Right on time Harry, thank you for being so prompt. I so wanted you to meet Joanna. Isn’t she just the prettiest girl you’ve ever seen?” 

Clearly embarrassed Harry edged nervously into the room and closed the door behind him, desperately using those few seconds to gather himself. Turning round, he smiled fondly at Betty and then towards Joanna, who had moved behind her grandmother and was stood with her delicate, beautifully manicured hand, upon the old lady’s shoulder. 

“Yes, very pretty, just as I would have expected from any relative of yours Betty.” He hoped that he had steered the conversation into a slightly less awkward direction, but the look of admiration on his face was clear to see. He was strongly attracted to Joanna, and now, stood with her back to the large double windows, he was able to appreciate what a fine figure she had, dressed as she was in a light, clingy top and hip-hugging white jeans. 

“Ah! You brought the cake! Well done!” The old lady’s face lit up as she moved to her feet and walked towards Harry. She accepted the cake and placed an affectionate kiss on his cheek. “Mrs Drodge will throw a hundred fits if she sees me eat some of this! I’m relying on you both to keep my secret.” 

“Oh Nan, you are so naughty! Must you always find ways to beat the system, encouraging this poor man to smuggle in contraband!” 

“Hush Jo. Stop rebuking me and pour the tea, I’m sure Harry could use a cup, and then we can get down to business.” Betty’s words were spoken with mock consternation, and Joanna laughed as she lifted the teapot. Harry just remained where he was standing, unable to move as Joanna’s smile further mesmerised him. 

“Harry, why don’t you take a seat?” In a way that only someone who commands respect can; Betty’s question was a thinly disguised order, and he obediently lowered himself into the two-seater settee that had somehow replaced the armchair in which he sat the day before. 

As Joanna busied herself making tea, Betty watched as the young people stared at one another. ‘It will take all of my story telling skills to hold their attention today’ she thought to herself with glee. 

“Now Jo, take a seat next to Harry. I’d like to discuss with the both of you the whereabouts of a certain silver chain and heart-shaped locket.” 

Without another word, Joanna sat herself beside Harry. He had visited the old lady today to learn more about his relative and the locket, but now his mind was filled with different thoughts. She had the aroma of summer about her, freshly mown grass and forest flowers. Joanna placed one hand in her lap, and subconsciously rested the other on the settee between herself and Harry. In that instant, he felt an overwhelming urge to scoop her hand up and hold it in his own. When he was a child, Harry had loved listening to stories told by his mother, and all the way through her tales, he would hold her hand. Today though, he thought, he would have to listen to Betty without such familiar comforts. 

“Harry, my sister and your Great Uncle were very much in love. They probably didn’t realise just how much until the day that John left to join the army. In a time when decency stifled spontaneous declarations of affection, that young couple adored one another. I remember the one occasion that Sally often referred to as one of the happiest days of her life; the Summer Ball at our father’s house.” 

Betty looked at the young people sat before her with utter fondness. Were they aware that almost as soon as she had started speaking, they had begun to hold hands? From the moment that she had met Harry, Betty was convinced that she had found the future husband for her granddaughter, and now, as she prepared to tell her favourite love story, they were already forming the intricate bonds that would surely last a lifetime. 

“On the night of the dance, I had helped Sally to get ready. It must have taken us all afternoon, and she looked unimaginably attractive. We had it all planned, Sally was to wait in her room until John and his parents arrived, and then she would time her own arrival to make a grand entrance …

 

“Oh Sally!” Betty bounced up and down on her knees on the large four-poster bed, clapping excitedly, “John has just arrived outside!” 

Sally moved gracefully over to the window, barely controlling her own elation and nervousness as she peeked through the curtains. Yes it was the Courtneys. For a moment she watched as John helped his mother from the carriage. He looked so suave in his black tail suit, and she noticed how he was fumbling distractedly with his bow tie. How Sally hoped that his mind was on her! 

“Sally, we have to go quickly. You MUST be at the top of the stairway as they walk into the entrance hall!”  

Betty was stood at the bedroom door, wearing her nightdress, smiling gleefully as her very own little plot was unfurling. Daddy had not allowed her to attend the dance, she was to be in bed, but it was her idea that Sally should make an entrance like a princess. 

“How do I look, Bett?” Sally looked over at her little sister as she cast an expert, highly critical eye over the vision before her.  

“Quite perfect” remarked the small child with another huge smile as she turned and opened the bedroom door. “Now, take a deep breath and prepare to have the night of your life.” 

“Oh YOU!!” giggled Sally, “Its just a dance!” But they both knew that Betty had the situation perfectly summed up. 

The Courtney’s walked into the entrance hall just as Sally appeared at the top of the large staircase. John’s father led his family in, and set about removing his cloak. As he did so, he looked up, and a wide grin spread across his face as he caught the first glimpse of Sally stood there, so obviously waiting to time her entrance. He gestured with his eyes to Mrs Courtney, who smiled back with a knowing nod of agreement. 

John was much slower in taking in the scene. People were bustling around the hallway, taking coats and cloaks. A young woman offered to take John’s overcoat, which he had laid over his arm, and he handed it over thankfully. It was at that moment that he looked up to the first floor landing and saw Sally. 

In every person’s life, there are a handful of moments which seem to emblazon themselves upon a special part of the brain, making them indelible forever. This moment was to be one of John’s. 

Upon her little sister’s cue, Sally had started to walk with practiced poise towards the top of the stairs, her hands held demurely across her stomach until she lifted her left arm to rest gently upon the banister. John Courtney’s father, sensing the mood of the moment, whispered to his family “Doesn’t young Sally look enchanting tonight? Beautiful, just beautiful.” 

Mrs Courtney nodded, but John didn’t even hear his father’s comment. Sally had started to round the gentle curve of the stairway and now she was facing him full on, allowing the young man to feast his eyes fully on the vision before him. 

As he stared wondrously at her, he started to walk forward subconsciously, all the while his eyes taking in her beauty appreciatively. 

She was wearing an exquisite ball gown. Her bare shoulders swaying seductively as she slowly descended the stairs. The tight bodice hugging her figure perfectly, accentuating the fullness of her breasts and showing the merest hint of a cleavage. The full flowing skirts moved beautifully as Sally took one slow step after another, her hips rocking side to side. 

The effect on John was exactly as the two girls had dreamed it would be. He was captivated by her beauty and femininity. 

“Sally, you look incredible tonight. Let me help you down these last few stairs.” Sally smiled confidently as if to say ‘Do I really? I hadn’t given it much thought’,  and accepted his outstretched hand. 

He leaned forward to kiss her cheek and she blushed as his lips touched her skin. “Good evening Mr Courtney, Mrs Courtney. My father will be delighted that you were able to come tonight.” 

Mrs Courtney moved forward, smiling warmly. “I hope you don’t mind us bringing John along, he usually has no interest in these occasions.” 

Mr Courtney chuckled “Good evening Sally, you look lovely” 

“Thank you, Sir” Her smile was genuine and edged with a little embarrassment. So many compliments, she wasn’t used to such attention. 

Finally she looked back to John, having adequately followed polite procedure and welcomed her father’s guests. “I’m so glad you decided to make an exception and attend our ball, John.” 

“Wild horses could not have dragged me away Sally,” he whispered as he escorted her from the stairs to the large double doors that led into the ballroom. 

A tiny voice from the first floor landing shouted out “Have a smashing evening, you two!” No one could see quite where it came from. 

-oOo-

 The quartet sat at the Northern end of the ballroom was busily performing a gentle melody and several people were already dancing. Couples moving gracefully across the highly polished floor, their outfits looking all the more grand under the light of the huge chandeliers; three of them spaced evenly along the length of the large room. 

Alone, near to the musicians, stood Sally’s father, watching his guests enjoying themselves. A beaming grin on his handsome features as he pretended to conduct the small ensemble.  

His glance met Sally’s as she entered the ballroom, and he threw her a big wave. She smiled back and dipped her eyes to the floor momentarily, before looking back up with a shy smile on her face. He realised that tonight she was here as a young woman, and not his little girl, and so he made an appropriately apologetic gesture, by turning up the corner of his mouth and brought his hands down smartly to his sides. 

Sally hadn’t noticed however, for she had already succumbed to the magic of the evening. 

As she had walked in, proudly at the arm of John Courtney, people had turned to see who had entered. The effect had been wonderful. Everyone seemed to be smiling and nodding in welcome as the young couple moved forward into the centre of the room. 

“I will be the envy of every man at the ball when we have our first dance, Sally.” John’s words didn’t sink in at first, Sally’s mind was floating away with he music that filled the room, but then it dawned upon her. Dance? DANCE?

With all her preparations to look the proper young lady, and the plan to make the big entrance, at no point had Sally or her sister considered the fact that she would be expected to dance. It had been several years since she was last shown how to dance, back before … 

“Ah, a waltz. Perfect. Sally, would you do me the honour?” John took a pace backwards and made an over exaggerated show of bowing to his companion. Clearly, he was enjoying the attention as much as Sally had been. 

Nervous now, panic stricken, Sally backed away a little, “Oh, ummmmm… yes John, of course, but, ummmmm… can we maybe have a few minutes to say hello to a few people?” 

John laughed, possibly out of his own nervousness. He knew that the entire room would be waiting for their first dance, and he couldn’t relax until it had been duly performed. “You can say hello to people all evening. Right now, we are going to bedazzle the room with our skills.” He took her left hand gently and guided her arm until her fingers rested upon his shoulder, and then, with a reassuring smile, he took a hold of her right hand and held it out to the side. Wrapping his own right arm around her waist, John pulled Sally carefully towards him. 

She looked pleadingly into his eyes, as if to say ‘Help me through this, my love’ and he winked back at her.  

Lifting his whole upper body slightly and with the merest turn of his hips, John moved his right leg forwards. Sally had no choice but to step back with her left leg and as soon as she had, she felt her body being strongly tilted to her right. Again, she could only move in one direction and her right leg moved in perfect unison with his guidance. “Just allow me to lead, Sally. I’ve been practising for months” 

She almost didn’t hear him, the room was now filled with people of all ages watching intently as the couple moved elegantly across the floor in a basic waltz, and there were mutterings of delight and approval filling her ears from every direction. 

John’s lead was firm and accurate, and Sally was surprised at how easy it was to ‘feel’ what her next step should be. Gradually, she began to relax, allowing herself at last to enjoy the fact that she was in the arms of the man she was hopelessly in love with.  

Other couples had taken to the floor now and even John was starting to relax. Sally could tell by the way his shoulders began to loose their tension, and the subsequent manner in which their upper bodies began to move in an easier rhythm with their footwork. 

John drew his partner closer; their hips touching in an intimate way that made Sally tremble. His movements were correct and respectable, and yet she was beginning to feel a sensation in her stomach that was completely new to her. Perhaps it was the combination of their closeness, the feeling of her dainty fingers clasped in his large, strong hand, and the scent of him as she breathed in. Even his own breath, as it caressed the side of her cheek, produced exquisite feelings within her sensually heightened body. 

Once more, Sally’s eyes met those of her father. He was still stood there by the quartet, smiling and swaying to the music. There, in the comforting arms of her partner, it suddenly struck how terribly wrong this whole scene was. 

The last time she had danced in this room, was when her mother had still been alive, and before she had had her riding accident. She had been stood a little way back from her parents, mimicking their movements as they waltzed together. She could still see joy in her father’s eyes, twinkling from the light of the chandeliers, as he held his wife close to him. 

And now, he stood there alone. So utterly alone. 

Her concentration faltered as she imagined how her father must really be feeling underneath that forced smile, and her left foot struck hard against John’s leg sending her falling to the floor. John moved quickly and managed to catch Sally. She turned and looked at him, mortified for having ruined the dance. “Oh John, I’m SO sorry” 

Without another word, she turned and ran towards the balcony, her face buried desolately in her hands, 

-oOo-

 She had been stood there for four or five minutes, and her tears had stopped flowing. She wasn’t sure if she was crying for her lonely father or for herself, having been so badly embarrassed by the fall. 

The summer evening was still light and the air was filled with the smell of honeysuckle and primroses. The first of the night’s stars was emerging and had begun to twinkle, as if calling to all its friends to come out and play. 

From the balcony, Sally looked out over the grounds, immaculately tended by her father’s own hands. Since the death of her mother, he seemed only to tend the gardens these days. All those years ago, when the family was whole, her mother had watched from her wheelchair, directing her husband in where to plant this, and when to prune that. She had been quite a bossy woman; father had preferred to use the word assertive. Nevertheless, for all her orders and moods, he had loved her dearly, with all his heart, and when she died, just after Sally’s tenth birthday, he had been devastated. 

“You’re thinking of your mother, aren’t you Sally?” John’s soothing voice caused Sally to spin round, and she dabbed at her eyes with her handkerchief as she looked back at him. “Yes, John, Daddy misses her so much and here I am, having a wonderful time. Well, at least I was. I’m very sorry for embarrassing you in there.” 

“Oh nonsense, we were still the best couple out there, watch carefully, others will trip too tonight. It certainly did not look nearly as bad as you might imagine – no-one but your father even noticed.” 

“Everyone else knows how to dance. I was never shown properly,” she protested as he moved towards her. “You were following me expertly, Sally. With grace and poise. Ask your father, he’ll tell you how proud you have made him. Now shall we finish our waltz?” 

Without another word, John took Sally in his arms and they began to dance again. In the solitude of the balcony, his hold was much closer now and the young couple moved slowly together, enjoying the intimacy of the moment.  

Relaxing into his embrace again Sally looked up into his eyes and smiled. Her left hand lifted from his shoulder and moved slowly to the back of his neck, where she started to caress him. John stopped dancing suddenly and lowered his head, “Sally, I am very much in love with you.” 

With those words his lips pressed against hers and he kissed her for the first time. Sally weakened as the touch of his mouth sent her mind in a spin. The feel of his soft lips against hers had a breathtaking effect. Finally, that aroma which always surrounded him was made real – she could actually taste him and it was like feeding on ambrosia. She moved her head forward wanting more, but John had stopped to look up at a window above. 

“We are being watched, my darling” 

Two stories above, a little girl’s head darted from the open window…

 

...I wish I hadn’t been so nosey, I’m sure they would have kissed all night long had they not seen me. Still, over the next few months, down by the tree in Colonel Brookes’ gardens, I’m sure they made up for it” 

Betty looked over at the two of them, sat on the sofa before her. Their hands were still touching, and neither of them seemed aware of it. Sally had been the artist, but Betty was most definitely the storyteller. Harry had not so much as taken a sip of his tea throughout the entire story, and Jo’s cup also sat untouched by her side. 

“Are you two going to let my tea go cold?”  

Almost as though a spell had been broken, Harry and Jo in perfect unison lifted their cups to their lips and sipped on the cooling tea. Chuckling to herself, Betty made herself comfortable once more. 

“And so, my children, Sally and John went daily to the Monkey Puzzle Tree where they would explore their love for one another. That is, until the day that John received his call up to the army. It was on that day that he presented Sally with the locket. It will not surprise either of you to learn that the locket, like Sally’s own heart, has never left the Monkey Puzzle Tree, and as soon as the weather allows it, the three of us are going to retrieve the family treasure …

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